data(content): address PR #146 review — Ghawr rename, faction pins, catalog

Review fixes for the #1019 heritage rebalance:

- Marib's farm world Ghouta -> Ghawr (Miri): "Ghouta" carries strong
  modern associations (2013 Damascus attack); Ghawr (the Jordan Rift
  Valley, an irrigated lowland farming region) keeps the water-fed-
  drylands sense without the resonance.
- Add dominant_faction = "independent" to GJ 914A / 508A / 1245B (Hoshe)
  — all five rebalanced systems are self-governing independent
  communities; uniform with siblings GJ 722 / 680 and clears V-FAC-01.
- catalog.md: fill GJ 914A -> Marib and GJ 722 -> Sığınak (Hoshe) — the
  two anchor systems still showed em-dash placeholders.
- Marib gttr: name the second aperture neighbour Sığınak instead of the
  bare "GJ 722" (Miri).

Pre-existing Golestan aperture/spur wording (reviewers split on whether
it is even wrong) is left for a separate content pass — not introduced
by this rename.

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.8 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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@@ -42199,7 +42199,7 @@
"parent_body_id": null,
"orbit_index": 2,
"body_type": "planet",
"proper_name": "Ghouta",
"proper_name": "Ghawr",
"atmosphere": "standard",
"inhabited": true,
"population": 18000,
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@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
},
{
"body_id": "GJ914Ac",
"proper_name": "Ghouta",
"proper_name": "Ghawr",
"body_type": "planet",
"orbit_index": 2,
"parent_body_id": null,
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ D-167 worldbuilding; keeps their cross-references internally consistent).
### GJ 914A — Droëland → Marib (arab)
- `star_systems.proper_name`: Droëland → **Marib**
- `bodies.GJ914Ac.proper_name`: Calvinia → **Ghouta**
- `bodies.GJ914Ac.proper_name`: Calvinia → **Ghawr**
- `stations.GJ914A-oort-S1.proper_name`: "Droëland Horizon" → **"Marib Horizon"**
- `system_specialization.toml [GJ 914A]`: economic stays NULL (heuristic); **add `cultural_specialization = "arab"`**; faction stays NULL
- atlas JSON `docs/atlas/proposals/GJ914A.json` (if present): proper_name → Marib
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# --- specialization/heritage-rebalance-batch.md). Names rewritten in systems.db.
["GJ 914A"]
cultural_specialization = "arab"
dominant_faction = "independent"
["GJ 508A"]
cultural_specialization = "arab"
dominant_faction = "independent"
["GJ 1245B"]
cultural_specialization = "persian"
dominant_faction = "independent"
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
---
id: GJ914Ac
name: Ghouta
name: Ghawr
body_type: planet
planet_class: cold_arid
body_scale: planet
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ render:
night_side_ambient: 0.025
---
# Ghouta
# Ghawr
Cold Arid planet.
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
"Barren Sands"
],
"cities": [
"Ghouta"
"Ghawr"
],
"pois": [
"North Fork"
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@@ -18,6 +18,6 @@ Three hundred years of preparation, never fully tested. The specific scale of Ma
## Practical Information
Marib is eight hops from Gateway with two apertures connecting to Sawad and GJ 722. Agricultural surplus is available. Communication relay infrastructure receives significant maintenance attention. The community is hospitable to visitors who come with a purpose and brief with those who don't.
Marib is eight hops from Gateway with two apertures connecting to Sawad and Sığınak. Agricultural surplus is available. Communication relay infrastructure receives significant maintenance attention. The community is hospitable to visitors who come with a purpose and brief with those who don't.
Adams of the Guide rates Marib: *Self-sufficient. Generously prepared for a disaster that hasn't happened.*
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@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ Marib has maintained emergency stores sufficient for multi-year self-sufficiency
| Orbit | ID | Name | Type | Inhabited | Pop | Mass | Gravity | Year (d) | Day (h) | Atmo | Class | Hydro | Economy | Settlement | Industrial |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | `GJ914Ab` | — | planet | no | — | terrestrial | 0.42g | 24 | 19.4 | none | barren | — | — | — | — |
| 2 | `GJ914Ac` | Ghouta | planet | yes | 18K | terrestrial | 0.88g | 200 | 26.6 | standard | cold_arid | liquid_water | agricultural | dispersed | agricultural_export |
| 2 | `GJ914Ac` | Ghawr | planet | yes | 18K | terrestrial | 0.88g | 200 | 26.6 | standard | cold_arid | liquid_water | agricultural | dispersed | agricultural_export |
| 3 | `GJ914A-belt` | — | asteroid_belt | no | — | — | — | — | — | — | — | — | — | — | — |
| 4 | `GJ914Ad` | — | planet | no | — | terrestrial | 0.56g | 580 | 27.4 | thin | frozen | — | — | — | — |
| 5 | `GJ914Ae` | — | planet | no | — | terrestrial | 0.42g | 1600 | 30.2 | trace | frozen | ice | — | — | — |
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@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ Sorted by sector, then hop distance from Gateway.
| [GJ 324A](GJ-324A/index.md) | **Copernicus** | K-type | 8 | unsettled | spur_end | 2 |
| [GJ 482B](GJ-482B/index.md) | — | K-type | 8 | wave_4 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 598](GJ-598/index.md) | — | F-type | 8 | wave_5 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 914A](GJ-914A/index.md) | | K-type | 8 | wave_3 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 914A](GJ-914A/index.md) | **Marib** | K-type | 8 | wave_3 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 167](GJ-167/index.md) | — | K-type | 9 | unsettled | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 174](GJ-174/index.md) | — | K-type | 9 | wave_3 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 204](GJ-204/index.md) | — | M-type | 9 | wave_3 | through_route | 2 |
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@ Sorted by sector, then hop distance from Gateway.
| [GJ 556](GJ-556/index.md) | — | M-type | 9 | wave_4 | dead_end | 1 |
| [GJ 675](GJ-675/index.md) | — | K-type | 9 | wave_5 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 707](GJ-707/index.md) | **Dois Sóis** | binary | 9 | wave_3 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 722](GJ-722/index.md) | | M-type | 9 | wave_4 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 722](GJ-722/index.md) | **Sığınak** | M-type | 9 | wave_4 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 1267](GJ-1267/index.md) | — | M-type | 10 | wave_3 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 146](GJ-146/index.md) | — | M-type | 10 | wave_3 | through_route | 2 |
| [GJ 177](GJ-177/index.md) | — | M-type | 10 | wave_4 | through_route | 2 |