fix(copy): address PR #121 review comments (7 issues)

- Fix sova headquarters GJ 280B → GJ 280A (core.toml + tier1.toml)
- Relocate Ross 154 Water Cooperative to Kapteyn's Star (GJ 191)
- Fix Rødvik archetype gas_giant_skimming → frontier_ice_mining
- Fix Altmark shadow economy hop band (outer_reach → mid_reach, hop 6)
- Fix Holgersen naming (was Holmgren) in north_reach.toml
- Fix Hansestadt gate count 5 → 6 in currency_zones.toml
- Fix unclosed parenthesis in shadow_economy.toml CAPACITY GAP comment

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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2026-04-07 10:59:10 +02:00
co-authored by Claude Opus 4.6
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commit 75e003846b
6 changed files with 33 additions and 30 deletions
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@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ name = "Sova Station Works"
tier = 1
lore_archetype = "station_module_constructor"
behavioral_archetype = "producer"
headquarters_system = "GJ 280B"
headquarters_system = "GJ 280A"
headquarters_settlement = "Sova"
currency_preference = "tractus"
bloc_affiliation = "assembly"
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@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ tier = 2
lore_archetype = "corridor_freight_operator"
behavioral_archetype = "distributor"
corridor = "core"
headquarters_system = "GJ 280B"
headquarters_system = "GJ 280A"
headquarters_settlement = "Sova"
currency_preference = "tractus"
bloc_affiliation = "independent"
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
# deep_rock_extraction, medical_re_embodiment_clinic, corridor_freight_operator,
# commission_certification_agent, gas_giant_skimming, intelligence_network
# Notable systems: Calloway Reach (GJ 3325), Braemar (GJ 475), Stillvakt (GJ 534/west_reach),
# Dunbar (GJ 3991), Crown's Hollow (GJ 661A), Holmgren's Landing (GJ 880),
# Dunbar (GJ 3991), Crown's Hollow (GJ 661A), Holgersen's Landing (GJ 880),
# Havnfjord (GJ 3622), Ngata's Star (GJ 706), Fremantle (GJ 273)
# ==========================================================================
@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ gate_energy_dependent = false
backstory = "High-volume food production for the northern corridor, operating agricultural settlements on Waterkant's productive plains. The aquifer management situation is being monitored."
character = "Results-oriented, slightly defensive about the aquifer question. Waterkant Agricultural produces excellent grain yields and does not want to discuss the hydrological survey."
[holmgren_fermentation]
name = "Holmgren Fermentation Collective"
[holgersen_fermentation]
name = "Holgersen Fermentation Collective"
tier = 2
lore_archetype = "fermentation_cooperative"
behavioral_archetype = "cooperative"
@@ -68,11 +68,11 @@ bloc_affiliation = "independent"
scope = "regional"
primary_commodities = ["processed_food"]
secondary_commodities = ["agricultural_produce", "organic_compounds"]
branded_products = ["Holmgren Cellar Reserve", "Holgersen's Standard Ferment", "North Reach Culture Pack"]
branded_products = ["Holgersen Cellar Reserve", "Holgersen's Standard Ferment", "North Reach Culture Pack"]
shadow_connections = false
gate_energy_dependent = false
backstory = "The north reach's fermentation tradition in institutional form. Produces artisanal fermented food and beverage products through member-controlled processing."
character = "Unhurried, locally famous, politely resistant to outside attention. Four months in a fermentation cellar at Holmgren is apparently not uncomfortable. The correspondent who reported this was enthusiastic about it."
character = "Unhurried, locally famous, politely resistant to outside attention. Four months in a fermentation cellar at Holgersen's Landing is apparently not uncomfortable. The correspondent who reported this was enthusiastic about it."
[singh_seed_co]
name = "Singh Seed and Agri"
@@ -10,11 +10,10 @@
#
# Coverage: financial_clearing_house, corridor_freight_operator, gateway_transit_operator,
# heavy_industrial_manufacturer, commercial_law_firm, deep_rock_extraction,
# precision_instrument_maker, distribution_clearing_hub, gas_giant_skimming,
# precision_instrument_maker, distribution_clearing_hub, frontier_ice_mining,
# industrial_staple_farming, intelligence_network, deep_ocean_fishery,
# station_module_constructor, fermentation_cooperative, risk_underwriting_house,
# perishable_chain_operator, destination_hospitality_operator, asteroid_belt_mining,
# frontier_ice_mining
# perishable_chain_operator, destination_hospitality_operator, asteroid_belt_mining
# ==========================================================================
@@ -349,7 +348,7 @@ character = "Craftworthy, secretive about projections. Kopparhytta Mining Guild
[rodvik_geothermal_works]
name = "Rødvik Geothermal Works"
tier = 2
lore_archetype = "gas_giant_skimming"
lore_archetype = "frontier_ice_mining"
behavioral_archetype = "producer"
corridor = "west_reach"
headquarters_system = "GJ 581"
@@ -365,23 +364,23 @@ gate_energy_dependent = false
backstory = "Geothermally reliable energy and water supply for the outer west corridor, until someone actually investigates the deep geology. The reliability is real; the duration is uncertain."
character = "Confident about its output, less confident about its projection models. Rødvik Geothermal Works delivers consistently. How long this will continue is a matter on which it declines to speculate."
[ross154_water_cooperative]
name = "Ross 154 Water Cooperative"
[kapteyn_ice_cooperative]
name = "Kapteyn Ice Cooperative"
tier = 2
lore_archetype = "frontier_ice_mining"
behavioral_archetype = "cooperative"
corridor = "west_reach"
headquarters_system = "GJ 729"
headquarters_settlement = "Ross 154"
headquarters_system = "GJ 191"
headquarters_settlement = "Kapteyn's Star"
currency_preference = "mixed"
bloc_affiliation = "independent"
scope = "regional"
primary_commodities = ["water"]
secondary_commodities = ["fusion_fuel"]
branded_products = ["Ross Water Cooperative Standard", "Inner West Ice Extract", "Free Fuel Feedstock Certificate"]
branded_products = ["Kapteyn Ice Standard", "Inner West Ice Extract", "Free Fuel Feedstock Certificate"]
shadow_connections = false
gate_energy_dependent = false
backstory = "The inner west's fusion fuel feedstock supply, running ice extraction and basic refinement as a cooperative resource for the corridor's energy needs."
backstory = "The inner west's fusion fuel feedstock supply, running ice and Oort-capture extraction from Kapteyn's Star's outer system as a cooperative resource for the corridor's energy needs. The M0V primary's outer formation is cold and ice-rich; the cooperative has worked these bodies since Wave 4 settlement."
character = "Energetic in the most literal sense — provides the energy supply. Keep your helmet on."
[grunfeld_self_supply]
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@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ system_id = "GJ 832"
proper_name = "Hansestadt"
hop_distance = 5
gate_topology = "hub"
notes = "Major commercial hub (5-gate hub); seat of the Merchant Assembly (west_reach commercial body, distinct from the Concord Assembly). Compact-sympathetic but commercially invested in Assembly trade frameworks. Both currencies in active use due to high through-traffic volume from inner and outer corridor systems."
notes = "Major commercial hub (6-gate hub); seat of the Merchant Assembly (west_reach commercial body, distinct from the Concord Assembly). Compact-sympathetic but commercially invested in Assembly trade frameworks. Both currencies in active use due to high through-traffic volume from inner and outer corridor systems."
# --- Hop 6 — Outer transition zone (9 systems) ---------------------------
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@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
# actual contraband networks, unlicensed re-embodiment operations, Sol
# black markets filling gaps in formal medical and technical supply.
# The frontier shadow economy is a CAPACITY GAP (the Commission cannot
# physically reach here, not a deliberate choice to operate outside it.
# physically reach here), not a deliberate choice to operate outside it.
#
# WHAT THIS MEANS FOR THE INVESTIGATE VERB (Phase 3):
#
@@ -169,9 +169,9 @@ hop_range = [7, 9]
intensity_min = 0.45
intensity_max = 0.70
note = """
Commission presence is minimal. The Assembly's permanent trade delegate at Altmark
(GJ 357, hop 7) is the outer limit of sustained Assembly observation in the west_reach
corridor. Beyond that, enforcement is intermittent and practically symbolic.
Commission presence is minimal. Assembly observation thins sharply at this range —
the furthest sustained Commission post (Altmark, GJ 357) sits at mid_reach (hop 6),
one band inward. In outer_reach systems, enforcement is intermittent and practically symbolic.
Compact member systems dominate this band. Mark-denominated commerce is the norm;
Tractus is accepted but priced at a premium that reflects currency friction and
@@ -412,22 +412,26 @@ it simply has the resources to operate discretely rather than visibly.
"""
[system_overrides."GJ 357"]
# Altmark — Assembly trade delegate post, hop 7, west_reach border
# Altmark — Assembly trade delegate post, hop 6, mid_reach/Compact border
intensity = 0.48
rationale = """
Altmark hosts the Assembly's permanent trade delegate — the furthest sustained
Commission presence in the west_reach corridor. Its intensity is below the
outer_reach band midpoint (0.450.70 = midpoint ~0.57) because the delegate's
presence introduces informal scrutiny to transactions that would not otherwise
be reviewed. Operators in Altmark understand that the Commission watches here;
high-profile informal commerce that would be unremarkable in a deeper system
draws attention in Altmark.
Commission presence in the west_reach corridor. Its intensity is above the
mid_reach band midpoint (0.300.55 = midpoint ~0.42) because Altmark sits at
the edge of the Compact zone: outbound freight heading deeper into Compact space
passes through here, and a meaningful fraction of that commerce enters Compact
customs arrangements that Commission audit cannot follow.
The delegate's presence introduces informal scrutiny that suppresses the most
visible informal commerce. Operators in Altmark understand that the Commission
watches here; high-profile informal commerce that would be unremarkable in a
deeper system draws attention in Altmark.
However, Altmark is not truly an Assembly-compliant system. It is the border.
Both currencies circulate in daily commerce. Both sets of customs rules are
applied negotiably. The shadow economy is real but structured: informal-channel
operators have adapted to the delegate's presence, which means Altmark's shadow
economy is more disciplined and harder to observe than a typical hop-7 system —
economy is more disciplined and harder to observe than a typical hop-6 system —
but it is not suppressed. What you will find at Altmark is not absence of informal
commerce but absence of visible informal commerce.