fix(copy): address PR #121 review comments (7 issues)
- Fix sova headquarters GJ 280B → GJ 280A (core.toml + tier1.toml) - Relocate Ross 154 Water Cooperative to Kapteyn's Star (GJ 191) - Fix Rødvik archetype gas_giant_skimming → frontier_ice_mining - Fix Altmark shadow economy hop band (outer_reach → mid_reach, hop 6) - Fix Holgersen naming (was Holmgren) in north_reach.toml - Fix Hansestadt gate count 5 → 6 in currency_zones.toml - Fix unclosed parenthesis in shadow_economy.toml CAPACITY GAP comment Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 (1M context) <noreply@anthropic.com>
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@@ -371,7 +371,7 @@ name = "Sova Station Works"
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tier = 1
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lore_archetype = "station_module_constructor"
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behavioral_archetype = "producer"
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headquarters_system = "GJ 280B"
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headquarters_system = "GJ 280A"
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headquarters_settlement = "Sova"
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currency_preference = "tractus"
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bloc_affiliation = "assembly"
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@@ -290,7 +290,7 @@ tier = 2
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lore_archetype = "corridor_freight_operator"
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behavioral_archetype = "distributor"
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corridor = "core"
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headquarters_system = "GJ 280B"
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headquarters_system = "GJ 280A"
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headquarters_settlement = "Sova"
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currency_preference = "tractus"
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bloc_affiliation = "independent"
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@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
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# deep_rock_extraction, medical_re_embodiment_clinic, corridor_freight_operator,
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# commission_certification_agent, gas_giant_skimming, intelligence_network
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# Notable systems: Calloway Reach (GJ 3325), Braemar (GJ 475), Stillvakt (GJ 534/west_reach),
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# Dunbar (GJ 3991), Crown's Hollow (GJ 661A), Holmgren's Landing (GJ 880),
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# Dunbar (GJ 3991), Crown's Hollow (GJ 661A), Holgersen's Landing (GJ 880),
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# Havnfjord (GJ 3622), Ngata's Star (GJ 706), Fremantle (GJ 273)
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# ==========================================================================
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@@ -55,8 +55,8 @@ gate_energy_dependent = false
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backstory = "High-volume food production for the northern corridor, operating agricultural settlements on Waterkant's productive plains. The aquifer management situation is being monitored."
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character = "Results-oriented, slightly defensive about the aquifer question. Waterkant Agricultural produces excellent grain yields and does not want to discuss the hydrological survey."
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[holmgren_fermentation]
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name = "Holmgren Fermentation Collective"
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[holgersen_fermentation]
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name = "Holgersen Fermentation Collective"
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tier = 2
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lore_archetype = "fermentation_cooperative"
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behavioral_archetype = "cooperative"
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@@ -68,11 +68,11 @@ bloc_affiliation = "independent"
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scope = "regional"
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primary_commodities = ["processed_food"]
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secondary_commodities = ["agricultural_produce", "organic_compounds"]
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branded_products = ["Holmgren Cellar Reserve", "Holgersen's Standard Ferment", "North Reach Culture Pack"]
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branded_products = ["Holgersen Cellar Reserve", "Holgersen's Standard Ferment", "North Reach Culture Pack"]
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shadow_connections = false
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gate_energy_dependent = false
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backstory = "The north reach's fermentation tradition in institutional form. Produces artisanal fermented food and beverage products through member-controlled processing."
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character = "Unhurried, locally famous, politely resistant to outside attention. Four months in a fermentation cellar at Holmgren is apparently not uncomfortable. The correspondent who reported this was enthusiastic about it."
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character = "Unhurried, locally famous, politely resistant to outside attention. Four months in a fermentation cellar at Holgersen's Landing is apparently not uncomfortable. The correspondent who reported this was enthusiastic about it."
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[singh_seed_co]
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name = "Singh Seed and Agri"
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@@ -10,11 +10,10 @@
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#
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# Coverage: financial_clearing_house, corridor_freight_operator, gateway_transit_operator,
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# heavy_industrial_manufacturer, commercial_law_firm, deep_rock_extraction,
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# precision_instrument_maker, distribution_clearing_hub, gas_giant_skimming,
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# precision_instrument_maker, distribution_clearing_hub, frontier_ice_mining,
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# industrial_staple_farming, intelligence_network, deep_ocean_fishery,
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# station_module_constructor, fermentation_cooperative, risk_underwriting_house,
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# perishable_chain_operator, destination_hospitality_operator, asteroid_belt_mining,
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# frontier_ice_mining
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# perishable_chain_operator, destination_hospitality_operator, asteroid_belt_mining
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# ==========================================================================
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@@ -349,7 +348,7 @@ character = "Craftworthy, secretive about projections. Kopparhytta Mining Guild
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[rodvik_geothermal_works]
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name = "Rødvik Geothermal Works"
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tier = 2
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lore_archetype = "gas_giant_skimming"
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lore_archetype = "frontier_ice_mining"
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behavioral_archetype = "producer"
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corridor = "west_reach"
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headquarters_system = "GJ 581"
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@@ -365,23 +364,23 @@ gate_energy_dependent = false
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backstory = "Geothermally reliable energy and water supply for the outer west corridor, until someone actually investigates the deep geology. The reliability is real; the duration is uncertain."
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character = "Confident about its output, less confident about its projection models. Rødvik Geothermal Works delivers consistently. How long this will continue is a matter on which it declines to speculate."
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[ross154_water_cooperative]
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name = "Ross 154 Water Cooperative"
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[kapteyn_ice_cooperative]
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name = "Kapteyn Ice Cooperative"
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tier = 2
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lore_archetype = "frontier_ice_mining"
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behavioral_archetype = "cooperative"
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corridor = "west_reach"
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headquarters_system = "GJ 729"
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headquarters_settlement = "Ross 154"
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headquarters_system = "GJ 191"
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headquarters_settlement = "Kapteyn's Star"
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currency_preference = "mixed"
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bloc_affiliation = "independent"
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scope = "regional"
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primary_commodities = ["water"]
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secondary_commodities = ["fusion_fuel"]
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branded_products = ["Ross Water Cooperative Standard", "Inner West Ice Extract", "Free Fuel Feedstock Certificate"]
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branded_products = ["Kapteyn Ice Standard", "Inner West Ice Extract", "Free Fuel Feedstock Certificate"]
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shadow_connections = false
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gate_energy_dependent = false
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backstory = "The inner west's fusion fuel feedstock supply, running ice extraction and basic refinement as a cooperative resource for the corridor's energy needs."
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backstory = "The inner west's fusion fuel feedstock supply, running ice and Oort-capture extraction from Kapteyn's Star's outer system as a cooperative resource for the corridor's energy needs. The M0V primary's outer formation is cold and ice-rich; the cooperative has worked these bodies since Wave 4 settlement."
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character = "Energetic in the most literal sense — provides the energy supply. Keep your helmet on."
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[grunfeld_self_supply]
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@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ system_id = "GJ 832"
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proper_name = "Hansestadt"
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hop_distance = 5
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gate_topology = "hub"
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notes = "Major commercial hub (5-gate hub); seat of the Merchant Assembly (west_reach commercial body, distinct from the Concord Assembly). Compact-sympathetic but commercially invested in Assembly trade frameworks. Both currencies in active use due to high through-traffic volume from inner and outer corridor systems."
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notes = "Major commercial hub (6-gate hub); seat of the Merchant Assembly (west_reach commercial body, distinct from the Concord Assembly). Compact-sympathetic but commercially invested in Assembly trade frameworks. Both currencies in active use due to high through-traffic volume from inner and outer corridor systems."
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# --- Hop 6 — Outer transition zone (9 systems) ---------------------------
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@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@
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# actual contraband networks, unlicensed re-embodiment operations, Sol
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# black markets filling gaps in formal medical and technical supply.
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# The frontier shadow economy is a CAPACITY GAP (the Commission cannot
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# physically reach here, not a deliberate choice to operate outside it.
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# physically reach here), not a deliberate choice to operate outside it.
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#
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# WHAT THIS MEANS FOR THE INVESTIGATE VERB (Phase 3):
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#
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@@ -169,9 +169,9 @@ hop_range = [7, 9]
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intensity_min = 0.45
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intensity_max = 0.70
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note = """
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Commission presence is minimal. The Assembly's permanent trade delegate at Altmark
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(GJ 357, hop 7) is the outer limit of sustained Assembly observation in the west_reach
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corridor. Beyond that, enforcement is intermittent and practically symbolic.
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Commission presence is minimal. Assembly observation thins sharply at this range —
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the furthest sustained Commission post (Altmark, GJ 357) sits at mid_reach (hop 6),
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one band inward. In outer_reach systems, enforcement is intermittent and practically symbolic.
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Compact member systems dominate this band. Mark-denominated commerce is the norm;
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Tractus is accepted but priced at a premium that reflects currency friction and
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@@ -412,22 +412,26 @@ it simply has the resources to operate discretely rather than visibly.
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"""
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[system_overrides."GJ 357"]
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# Altmark — Assembly trade delegate post, hop 7, west_reach border
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# Altmark — Assembly trade delegate post, hop 6, mid_reach/Compact border
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intensity = 0.48
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rationale = """
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Altmark hosts the Assembly's permanent trade delegate — the furthest sustained
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Commission presence in the west_reach corridor. Its intensity is below the
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outer_reach band midpoint (0.45–0.70 = midpoint ~0.57) because the delegate's
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presence introduces informal scrutiny to transactions that would not otherwise
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be reviewed. Operators in Altmark understand that the Commission watches here;
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high-profile informal commerce that would be unremarkable in a deeper system
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draws attention in Altmark.
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Commission presence in the west_reach corridor. Its intensity is above the
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mid_reach band midpoint (0.30–0.55 = midpoint ~0.42) because Altmark sits at
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the edge of the Compact zone: outbound freight heading deeper into Compact space
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passes through here, and a meaningful fraction of that commerce enters Compact
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customs arrangements that Commission audit cannot follow.
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The delegate's presence introduces informal scrutiny that suppresses the most
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visible informal commerce. Operators in Altmark understand that the Commission
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watches here; high-profile informal commerce that would be unremarkable in a
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deeper system draws attention in Altmark.
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However, Altmark is not truly an Assembly-compliant system. It is the border.
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Both currencies circulate in daily commerce. Both sets of customs rules are
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applied negotiably. The shadow economy is real but structured: informal-channel
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operators have adapted to the delegate's presence, which means Altmark's shadow
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economy is more disciplined and harder to observe than a typical hop-7 system —
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economy is more disciplined and harder to observe than a typical hop-6 system —
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but it is not suppressed. What you will find at Altmark is not absence of informal
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commerce but absence of visible informal commerce.
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