fix(copy): address PR #88 re-review comments

Name pool fixes:
- Remove "Korr" from given_names (duplicate with family_names), replace with "Tork"
- Replace "Narek" with "Sorek" (real-world Armenian name, IP concern)
- Replace soft "-ael" endings (Vael→Vrek, Rael→Rask) to match naming rules
- Update comment: "no soft endings" → "hard endings preferred"
- Add 2 family names (Tollek, Dass) to balance pool ratio (now 40/18)

Voice fixes:
- Replace "same drill" (not an exclamation) with "cold vacuum"
- Rewrite 3 trader behaviors as observable stage directions
- Add 2 foreman off-duty behaviors (person beneath the role)
- Add break room behaviors to dock_worker, technician, foreman

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>

content/global/culture-krenn.ron

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
         style: "compact, consonant-heavy, first-name-primary in social contexts",
         // Pool the generator draws from. More names = more variety across runs.
         // Source: D-036 canonical examples + extended set following same phoneme rules.
-        // Rule: compact (1-2 syllables), consonant clusters welcome, no soft endings.
+        // Rule: compact (1-2 syllables), consonant clusters welcome, hard endings preferred.
         given_names: [
             // D-036 canonical set
             "Kael", "Voss", "Lera", "Torek", "Drin",
@@ -30,10 +30,10 @@
             "Tev", "Ren", "Sess", "Renn", "Olin",
             "Tav", "Resha", "Harek", "Sabel", "Pell",
             // Extended — same phoneme pattern
-            "Dav", "Korr", "Ness", "Pren", "Vel",
-            "Orin", "Mael", "Torra", "Narek", "Sev",
-            "Bren", "Linn", "Vael", "Darek", "Pess",
-            "Nell", "Kren", "Sorel", "Tavek", "Rael",
+            "Dav", "Tork", "Ness", "Pren", "Vel",
+            "Orin", "Mael", "Torra", "Sorek", "Sev",
+            "Bren", "Linn", "Vrek", "Darek", "Pess",
+            "Nell", "Kren", "Sorel", "Tavek", "Rask",
         ],
         family_names: [
             // D-036 canonical + extended
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
             "Lintar", "Darvo", "Kosse",
             // Extended
             "Pellan", "Sorren", "Tessik", "Morek", "Brav",
-            "Ossel", "Rennick", "Harven",
+            "Ossel", "Rennick", "Harven", "Tollek", "Dass",
         ],
         // Krenn culture is first-name-primary.
         // Family names exist but belong to institutional contexts: contracts, registrations, arrest records.
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@
             "blood and void",
             "void's sake",
             "damn all",
-            "same drill",
+            "cold vacuum",
         ],
     ),
 

content/global/industrial-zone-spec.ron

@@ -39,6 +39,7 @@
                 "hooks a cargo sling and steps clear before signaling the lift",
                 "stacks empty pallets against a wall with mechanical efficiency",
                 "wipes sweat from her face with a forearm and keeps moving",
+                "slumps into a break room chair and stares at nothing for a full minute before reaching for a drink",
             ],
         ),
         (
@@ -56,6 +57,7 @@
                 "presses an ear to a vibrating duct and listens",
                 "argues quietly with a display that isn't giving the right numbers",
                 "queries a fault log through her insert without touching the terminal, eyes briefly unfocused",
+                "stretches both arms overhead in the break room doorway, blocking it without noticing",
             ],
         ),
         (
@@ -72,6 +74,8 @@
                 "stands at the mezzanine rail watching throughput without expression",
                 "reviews shift handover notes and circles something with a stylus",
                 "speaks to a dock crew in a low voice — they listen without nodding",
+                "sits alone in the break room rubbing the back of her neck, datapad face-down on the table",
+                "laughs at something a technician says, then catches herself and goes quiet",
             ],
         ),
         (

content/global/rural-zone-spec.ron

@@ -67,9 +67,9 @@
             typical_behaviors: [
                 "squares goods on a fold-out portable display with deliberate care",
                 "leans back on a stool and watches the foot traffic",
-                "counts credit chits with one thumb while talking to a customer",
-                "haggles with quiet patience — lets silence do the work",
-                "notes which locals are buying what, and remembers",
+                "flicks credit chits across the counter with one thumb, barely glancing down",
+                "holds eye contact through a long pause, waiting for the price to land",
+                "watches a regular browse the same shelf as last time and says nothing",
                 "packs unsold goods with no visible frustration",
             ],
         ),