content(wiki): sprint 37 copy — D-193, v0.1 residue purge, 105 corp stubs #138
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Sprint 37 copy team — three maintenance tickets shipped in one session.
wiki/star-systems/GJ-35/sova/subtree (5 files + 2 dirs). Strips v0.1 example blocks from authoring guides and_templates/. Rewrites canonical lore that cited dropped v0.1 NPCs. Converts"Van Maanen's Star"cultural references to"Vuurkloof"(canonical in-game name). Applies Commission drift fixes reach-wide.Gold-standard reference:
wiki/corporations/alcyone-tech.md— authenticated timing side-channel vulnerability, legal non-disclosure decision, accelerated refresh cycle disguised as "performance enhancement." Every stub follows this iceberg-quality bar.Commit structure:
9c68613adecide(content): D-193 Lattice Commission (3 files)25eb8bd0content(wiki): #865 residue purge (76 files)fdf8dd48content(wiki): #861 corp stub authoring (105 files)Test plan
alcyone-tech.md,meridional-banking.md,vlaams-atelier.md) — verify three-layer structure, ≥95 lines, iceberg concealed fact.wiki/forConcord Commission/Assembly Commission— should return only theglossary.md:19"NOT:" entry documenting forbidden forms.wiki/forv0\.1— should return only authoring-guide "v0.1 examples removed (D-122)" explanatory notes.wiki/forVan Maanen— should return only astronomical-context references (glossary.md,GJ-35/index.mdCalibration Note).wiki/star-systems/GJ-35/sova/directory should not exist.decisions/content.mdhas D-193 section,decisions/questions-content.mdQ-095 marked Resolved,decisions/questions.mdcount summary updated (Content: 11 resolved / 12 open).Review: sprint-37/copy → main (PR #138)
Reviewers: Hoshe (QA) + Paula (narrative) + Miri (world consistency).
Verdict: CHANGES REQUESTED
Authoring quality is genuinely high — Paula confirms no concealed-fact monoculture (top trope 25%, below threshold); Miri confirms healthy corridor cultural mixing; Hoshe confirms no template bleed. Four error-severity items require fixing before merge, plus mechanical warnings and a critical merge-time note.
🚨 Merge-conflict risk (for the merger, not a fix item)
8 corp files conflict with main — server team's #860 work modified tags on the same files the copy team authored to three-layer depth:
bergkraft-antriebswerke,gate-corporation,jeju-lattice,norrland-woodcraft,shetland-wool,stalownia-kowalski,svanevann-waters,tongyeong-driveMerge instruction: take copy's narrative body AND preserve server's tag updates. Do not auto-resolve.
gate-corporationandstalownia-kowalskicurrently have emptytags: []on the copy branch — server's additions are the only content in dispute there. The other 6 already have tags on copy side, so merger must reconcile both sets.Hoshe — QA & Structural: REQUEST_CHANGES
Authoring quality is not in question — three-layer structure is complete across the sample, concealed-fact language is distinct (no template bleed), no placeholder strings. Two mechanical defects.
wiki/corporations/saigon-consulting.md(81 lines)wiki/corporations/haesungdan-records.md(83 lines)wiki/corporations/calluna-wellness.md(84 lines)wiki/corporations/leerfeld-records.md(84 lines)ondori-interactive→transit-library## Relationshipsinstead of## Political Relationships. Gold-standard uses the longer form; this was a mid-batch slip. One find-replace across the blockNote on pre-existing sub-95 stubs:
nordmark-skog(60),talbrau(62),bifrost-marmor(70),moorfield-records(75),nordschatten-records(75),spitsbergen-retreat(76),lusaka-advisory(78),vuma-sound(78) — created 2026-03-14 to 2026-04-05, before this sprint. Out of scope for #861, but file an audit ticket if the three-layer standard applies retroactively.Paula — Narrative Depth & Political Integration: REQUEST_CHANGES
The 105-stub batch is strong work. The iceberg principle is applied with craft — every stub sampled carries a concealed fact with legal teeth, affected parties, and institutional consequences. Three errors in the lattice-commission.md / factions/index.md residue cluster.
Concealed-fact pattern scan (20-stub sample)
No single trope exceeds 30%. Monoculture threshold not triggered. The "certification gap" cluster at 25% is structurally distinct within itself (timing side-channel, testing protocol omission, lapsed re-certification, fixture divergence, bylaw expansion) — variations on an institutional failure type rather than template repetition.
Moral register correctly distributed. No cartoon evil. Actors make choices that are commercially rational, legally defensible under some construction, and harmful in ways that compound quietly. Setting tone of complicity in mundane wrong is sustained.
Politically rich Commission-blindspot stubs: Nordhavn Financial, Alcyone, Calluna Wellness, Gridsupply — Commission's presence structurally felt through its absence.
Comments
wiki/factions/index.md:25[The Ring](the-ring.md)butthe-ring.mdwas deleted in #865. Main working tree has the row removed (unstaged), confirming intent — but the change was not committed to the branchwiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:98, 136[The Ring](the-ring.md)links remain in Faction Relationships table (line 98) and Cross-References section (line 136)wiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:124-129wiki/corporations/lusaka-advisory.md"What They Don't Talk About"wiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:7updated:timestamp still2026-02-13; Sprint 37 edits should refreshwiki/corporations/gridsupply-electronics.md:60wiki/corporations/commonstock-foods.mdD-193 assessment
Decision quality is adequate. Rationale correctly identifies domain-scoped names (FDA, FAA) vs charter-body names, and the disambiguation benefit against "Concord" uses. Affected-scope list is precise. Integration in stubs is consistent (all sampled use "Lattice Commission" long-form on first reference, "the Commission" subsequent). One documentation debt: D-193 does not name who proposed/rejected the "Concord Commission" / "Assembly Commission" alternatives — knowing which agent produced the drift would prevent recurrence.
Miri — World Consistency: REQUEST_CHANGES
Corridor cultural mixing is strong (Portuguese/African south_reach, Korean/Japanese/Chinese/Vietnamese east_reach, Nordic/German/Dutch west_reach with English cross-cultural blend). Two concrete gaps in purge and glossary.
Corridor scan
Comments
wiki/glossary.md:20NOT: "Lattice Commission". D-193 commit must include a glossary update removing this prohibition and updating the Commission entry. If the update is supposed to be on the branch and isn't, that's the gapwiki/corporations/mastroianni-vehicle-group.md:~93wiki/corporations/ferreira-monteiro.md:~88wiki/corporations/gate-corporation.md:~32wiki/corporations/stalownia-kowalski.md:~99wiki/corporations/endymion-instruments.mdwiki/corporations/westfield-common.mdfeedback_earth_echo_names.md, geographic Earth-echo is acceptable; "Westfield" is a genuine English field name predating the brand. Not blocking, flag for second look when stub expandswiki/star-systems/GJ-35/sova/transit/index.md:27Summary of blocking issues
4 error-severity fixes required:
wiki/factions/index.md:25wiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:98,136lattice-commission.md:124-129wiki/glossary.md:20to removeNOT: "Lattice Commission"prohibition per D-1939 warning-severity items (4 line-count expansion, 4 Van Maanen residue, 1 lusaka documentary anchor). All mechanical.
Pre-merge actions (non-fix)
updated:timestamps on Sprint-37-edited filesRetraction — PR #138 review (Miri's comments)
Lead-reviewed Miri's comments against the branch after author pushback. 6 of 8 Miri comments are false positives and are retracted:
origin/sprint-37/copywiki/glossary.md:20still saysNOT: "Lattice Commission"NOT:line reads"Concord Commission," "Assembly Commission," "the Regulatory Commission"— "Lattice Commission" is not in the NOT list. D-193 resolution is cited inline ("Resolved by D-193 (2026-04-21)")wiki/corporations/mastroianni-vehicle-group.md:~93"Van Maanen's Star" residuegrep -n -i "van maanen|sova"on branch returns zero hitswiki/corporations/ferreira-monteiro.md:~88"Van Maanen's Star" residuewiki/corporations/gate-corporation.md:~32"residents of Van Maanen's Star"wiki/corporations/stalownia-kowalski.md:~99"Station Sova and the Van Maanen's Star"wiki/star-systems/GJ-35/sova/transit/index.md:27stale link labelMiri's other two comments stand:
endymion-instruments.mddoesn't follow frontier naming conventionwestfield-common.mdEarth-echo edge caseUpdated blocker list
With M1 retracted, remaining errors are:
wiki/factions/index.md:25— dangling[The Ring](the-ring.md)row in Local Factions tablewiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:98, 136— two dangling[The Ring]cross-referenceswiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:124-129— v0.1 smuggler/detective framing in Gameplay Presence section missed by #865All three errors cluster in two files —
wiki/factions/index.mdandwiki/factions/lattice-commission.md. The fix scope is substantially smaller than the original review suggested.Warnings also shrink:
## Relationshipsheader drift) — STANDSupdated:timestamp) — STANDSVerdict: CHANGES REQUESTED (reduced scope)
Blockers contained to 2 files in
wiki/factions/. Everything else is mechanical polish. Original merge-conflict note on 8 corp files still applies at merge time.Review fixes (commit
b6107393)Errors — FIXED
wiki/factions/index.md— replaced the canonical "Local Factions / The Ring" table with a prose note.the-ring.mdstill exists on the branch (rewritten in #865 with role-name exemplars — Ring Coordinator / Shift Supervisor / THE FRIEND — rather than the v0.1 named NPCs), so I kept it linked as a structural archetype rather than deleting the row outright.wiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:98,136— replaced both The Ring cross-refs with "informal contraband networks" framing. Added D-193 cross-ref to close the loop.wiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:124-129— full Gameplay Presence rewrite. The v0.1 smuggler/detective framing (THE FRIEND detective path, Commission kiosk in the logistics hub, "detective's arrival") is gone. Replaced with corridor-wide structural description: certification inspectors on risk-weighted schedules, field investigators operating across corridor clusters, compliance kiosks, audit cadence.wiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:7—updated:now 2026-04-22.Warnings — FIXED
## Political Relationshipssection that the gold-standard (alcyone-tech) has — same systematic gap we caught on mellanie3 during cycle 2, just applied to earlier files. Added the section + one extra cross-reference each.ondori-interactive→transit-libraryalphabetical range — bulk renamed## Relationships→## Political Relationships. Confirmed zero remaining via grep.lusaka-advisory.md— documentary anchor added. The firm's cross-engagement reference ledger (internal partner-only document maintained since the 2052 restructuring) + the 2058 partner-retreat memo explicitly declining to present it in dispute forums give the player a reachable paper trail. Addresses the "exists entirely in partners' heads" weakness.Errors — flagged as FALSE POSITIVES (verified clean on branch)
glossary.md:19NOT-list. Current branch reads:NOT: "Concord Commission," "Assembly Commission," "the Regulatory Commission". "Lattice Commission" is not in the NOT list — Mellanie removed it in the D-193 commit (9c68613a). Reviewer may be reading a pre-rebase snapshot.mastroianni-vehicle-group.md:~93,ferreira-monteiro.md:~88,gate-corporation.md:~32,stalownia-kowalski.md:~99— all four files grep clean. #865 Bucket C (commit25eb8bd0) rewrote these. The only remaining "Station Sova" hit inwiki/corporations/issova-station-works.md:83, which is the legitimate GJ-280B Slavic-heritage station (different Sova from the deleted v0.1 GJ-35 one).wiki/star-systems/GJ-35/sova/transit/index.md:27— file was deleted in commit25eb8bd0. No fix possible; link label cannot exist.Info-only comments — LEFT AS-IS
feedback_earth_echo_names.mdmemory, geographic Earth-echo is acceptable.Pre-merge actions
Ready for re-review.
Review: sprint-37/copy → main (PR #138) — Round 2
Reviewers: Hoshe (QA) + Paula (narrative) + Miri (world consistency).
Verdict: CHANGES REQUESTED
All 4 round-1 errors (P1, P2, P3, M1) correctly addressed; 13 warnings fixed or justified; false-positive retraction documented. Two new errors introduced by the round-2 fix commit itself; both are small mechanical/consistency items.
🎯 Reliability check
Worktree-CWD discipline (added to
/pr-reviewSKILL.md after round 1) held this round. Miri's output shows grep commands inline with their output, every finding verifiable against/var/mnt/data/projects/settled-reach/.sprint/sprint-37/copy/. No false positives from reading main. Spot-checks of Paula's N1 and N2 confirm both real on the branch.Hoshe — QA & Structural: APPROVE
All 4 line-count warnings fixed with substantive content. Spot-check of
ondori-interactive.md(a conflict-set file in the H5 block) confirms authoring quality intact post-rename.saigon-consulting.md≥95haesungdan-records.md≥95calluna-wellness.md≥95leerfeld-records.md≥95## Relationships→## Political Relationshipsgrep -rn "^## Relationships$"acrosswiki/corporations/returns zero hits; all 137 files with that section now use canonical form[ ]in PR body. Nit; flagged for future copy-branch PRs to check before openingPaula — Narrative Depth & Political Integration: REQUEST_CHANGES
P2, P3, P4 are among the strongest round-2 fixes seen this sprint — politically integrated, not mechanical substitution. P3's replacement reads like the Reach:
That's a mechanics hook written in world language.
wiki/factions/index.md:25Ring rowthe-ring.mdas "the informal contraband network archetype used as a structural reference." Spot-check confirmsthe-ring.mdis still titled "The Ring" withfaction_type: criminalandstatus: canonical. It's a named faction, not an archetype doc. Cross-ref misrepresents the targetlattice-commission.md:98, 136cross-refslattice-commission.md:124-129Gameplay Presence rewritelusaka-advisory.mddocumentary anchorlattice-commission.md:7updated:timestamp2026-04-22, but footer at line 144 still reads**Updated:** 2026-02-12. Two timestamp fields in one file now contradictNew comments
wiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:144**Updated:** 2026-02-12contradicts frontmatterupdated: 2026-04-22(line 8). The round-1 fix only touched frontmatter; footer needs same refresh or removal. Verified on branchwiki/factions/index.md+lattice-commission.mdcross-refs to the-ring.mdfaction_type: criminal,status: canonical— a named faction, not an archetype. Options: (a) rewrite the-ring.md as an archetype doc consistent with the new cross-ref description, or (b) rewrite the cross-refs to describe the actual named-faction contentMiri — World Consistency: APPROVE
Worktree-CWD discipline applied correctly — every finding backed by a grep command run against the worktree path. Zero false positives from round-1's reading-main issue.
Verification commands
grep -rn "Concord Commission\|Assembly Commission"in wiki/ → 0 hitsgrep -rn "Van Maanen\|Sova Transit"in wiki/ → 0 hits (residue confined to legacy server test fixtures outside wiki/)Standing items
endymion-instruments.mdGreek mythological name vs frontier convention. Non-blocker; deliberate choice, consistentSummary of blocking issues
2 new errors from round-2 fix commit itself:
lattice-commission.md:144footer timestamp still 2026-02-12 (frontmatter correctly updated to 2026-04-22)the-ring.mdcross-ref description mismatch (cross-refs say "archetype", file is "named criminal faction")Both are ~5-minute mechanical fixes. N2 requires a decision call: rewrite the-ring.md as an archetype, or rewrite the cross-refs to describe the faction as-is.
Merge-conflict note on the 8 corp files from round 1 still applies. Test-plan boxes (H6) still unchecked in PR body.
Round 2 fixes (commit
75287f95)Both new errors addressed.
N1 — FIXED
wiki/factions/lattice-commission.md:144— footer**Updated:**refreshed from2026-02-12to2026-04-22. Frontmatter (line 8) and footer (line 144) now agree.N2 — FIXED via option (b) — accurate cross-ref description
wiki/factions/index.md— rewrote the Local Factions block to describethe-ring.mdas it actually is on the branch: a canonical named faction (faction_type: criminal,status: canonical) documenting an informal contraband network at district scale, preserved as the one maintained worked example for corridor authors. Table row restored with accurate description.Picked option (b) rather than (a) because the-ring.md's content is still structurally useful — contraband categories, ring mechanics table, community role economics, vulnerability signals — and rewriting it as a stripped-down archetype doc would discard authoring value. The name-anchored document accurately serves both as a canonical faction reference AND as a structural template for future district-scale network authoring.
On lattice-commission.md N2 (no change needed)
Double-checked:
grep archetype|the-ring.mdinwiki/factions/lattice-commission.mdreturns zero hits. The only corridor-wide phrasing there is "informal contraband networks" in the Faction Relationships table, which is a generic structural observation about smuggling as a Commission enforcement target — not a cross-ref to the-ring.md. No misrepresentation to fix.H6 — PR test-plan boxes
Nit acknowledged; flagged for future copy-branch PRs to tick boxes before opening. Not checking them retroactively since the reviewer already ran all 6 greps in round 1 and confirmed passing.
Merge-conflict note
Still applies for merge time: 8 corp files conflict with main's #860 tag work. Per earlier reviewer instruction, take copy's narrative body AND preserve server's tag updates. Do not auto-resolve.
Ready for re-review.
Review: sprint-37/copy → main (PR #138) — Round 3
Direct verification on branch worktree. Both N-items from round 2 confirmed fixed.
Verdict: APPROVED
Single round-3 commit
75287f95targets exactly N1 and N2; 6 line changes across 2 files. Verified on/var/mnt/data/projects/settled-reach/.sprint/sprint-37/copy/:lattice-commission.md:144footer**Updated:**timestampupdated: 2026-04-22and line 144 footer**Updated:** 2026-04-22now agreewiki/factions/index.mdcross-ref mischaracterization of the-ring.mdlattice-commission.mdcross-refsThree-round arc
/pr-review)Reliability win
The structural fix to
/pr-review(require reviewers to read from the team worktree, not main) worked. Round-2 reviewers each showed verifiable grep commands against the worktree path; spot-checks on 2 Paula findings confirmed on branch. No false positives in rounds 2 or 3.Merge reminder
Merge-conflict note on the 8 corp files from round 1 still applies: server team's #860 work touched tags on the same files copy authored. Merger must take copy narrative + preserve server tags, manual resolution required.
Ready to merge.
Pull request closed