Sprint 3 "Know" — 15 tickets building the content design foundation for v0.1. All documentation/content work, no code changes. 39 files changed, ~5,100 lines added.
Wave 0 — Wiki Maintenance
Renamed Hael → Naia Tamm across 16 wiki files
Applied canonical full names to 11 single-name NPCs
Wave 0 wiki maintenance for Sprint 3:
- #372: Rename Hael → Naia Tamm across 16 living wiki files (phonetic collision fix)
- #371: Apply canonical full names to 11 single-name NPC headers and roster table
- #375: Replace hub_m_ → terminal_m_ shortcodes, add shortcode reference table,
situation overlap rules, and mood exclusivity rules to monologue guide
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
Well-organized PR with 38 files, 5k+ lines. Hael->Naia Tamm rename executed cleanly across all wiki and design files. Cross-references verified (50+ links), formatting consistent, NPC profile structure uniform across all tiers. No broken links, no spelling errors, no orphaned files.
No issues found.
Paula (Narrative Depth): APPROVE
Exceptional character work. Voice discipline is strong (smuggler fragments vs. detective complete sentences). Moral arc's 4-phase progression creates genuine emotional stakes. Triangle 1 fork produces real consequences across all 3 paths. Naia as MIRROR is devastating in her honesty. PC-as-NPC neutral path elegantly solves second-playthrough recognition.
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File
Severity
Issue
1
smuggler-moral-arc.md ~sec4
suggestion
Kael Contradiction Discovery dual-fire sequence (15-30s delay) -- flag as tuning target to avoid feeling like one event
2
npc-patterns/the-mirror.md ~sec6
suggestion
Clarify edge case: MIRROR NPCs can be wrong (lied to) without being dishonest
3
triangle-1-hub-power.md ~sec3c
suggestion
Path C creates deferred follow-up fork -- flag in implementation ticket or accept unresolved tension
4
pc-as-npc-spec.md ~sec11
suggestion
5 public-tier detective-NPC lines may feel thin on replay -- consider rotation variants post-v0.1
5
entity-attributes.md moral_weight
suggestion
Clarify whether detective uses moral_weight with same or different criteria than smuggler
Miri (World Consistency): REQUEST_CHANGES
Excellent internal consistency across 18+ NPC files, triangles, and design specs. Ring structure, entity attributes, naming conventions, and dual-lens framework all verified clean. IP is original. However, stale "Hael" references remain in decisions/content.md -- the canonical source of truth.
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File
Severity
Issue
1
decisions/content.md ~line 55 (D-034)
critical
"trying to exit the ring to protect partner Hael" -- should be "partner Naia"
2
decisions/content.md ~line 56 (D-034)
critical
"protecting friend Hael" -- should be "protecting friend Naia"
3
decisions/content.md ~line 90 (D-036)
critical
Krenn naming example list includes "Hael" alongside "Naia" -- confusing since Hael is no longer an active NPC name. Remove or annotate.
Verdict: CHANGES REQUESTED
The copy branch content itself is clean and production-ready. Three stale "Hael" references remain in decisions/content.md (D-034 and D-036) on main. These should be fixed on main before or after merge -- the copy team cannot fix files outside their branch.
Paula's 5 suggestions are non-blocking improvements for future content passes.
## Review: copy -> main (type: copy)
### Hoshe (QA): APPROVE
Well-organized PR with 38 files, 5k+ lines. Hael->Naia Tamm rename executed cleanly across all wiki and design files. Cross-references verified (50+ links), formatting consistent, NPC profile structure uniform across all tiers. No broken links, no spelling errors, no orphaned files.
No issues found.
### Paula (Narrative Depth): APPROVE
Exceptional character work. Voice discipline is strong (smuggler fragments vs. detective complete sentences). Moral arc's 4-phase progression creates genuine emotional stakes. Triangle 1 fork produces real consequences across all 3 paths. Naia as MIRROR is devastating in her honesty. PC-as-NPC neutral path elegantly solves second-playthrough recognition.
| # | File | Severity | Issue |
|---|------|----------|-------|
| 1 | `smuggler-moral-arc.md` ~sec4 | suggestion | Kael Contradiction Discovery dual-fire sequence (15-30s delay) -- flag as tuning target to avoid feeling like one event |
| 2 | `npc-patterns/the-mirror.md` ~sec6 | suggestion | Clarify edge case: MIRROR NPCs can be wrong (lied to) without being dishonest |
| 3 | `triangle-1-hub-power.md` ~sec3c | suggestion | Path C creates deferred follow-up fork -- flag in implementation ticket or accept unresolved tension |
| 4 | `pc-as-npc-spec.md` ~sec11 | suggestion | 5 public-tier detective-NPC lines may feel thin on replay -- consider rotation variants post-v0.1 |
| 5 | `entity-attributes.md` moral_weight | suggestion | Clarify whether detective uses moral_weight with same or different criteria than smuggler |
### Miri (World Consistency): REQUEST_CHANGES
Excellent internal consistency across 18+ NPC files, triangles, and design specs. Ring structure, entity attributes, naming conventions, and dual-lens framework all verified clean. IP is original. However, stale "Hael" references remain in `decisions/content.md` -- the canonical source of truth.
| # | File | Severity | Issue |
|---|------|----------|-------|
| 1 | `decisions/content.md` ~line 55 (D-034) | critical | "trying to exit the ring to protect partner Hael" -- should be "partner Naia" |
| 2 | `decisions/content.md` ~line 56 (D-034) | critical | "protecting friend Hael" -- should be "protecting friend Naia" |
| 3 | `decisions/content.md` ~line 90 (D-036) | critical | Krenn naming example list includes "Hael" alongside "Naia" -- confusing since Hael is no longer an active NPC name. Remove or annotate. |
### Verdict: CHANGES REQUESTED
The copy branch content itself is clean and production-ready. Three stale "Hael" references remain in `decisions/content.md` (D-034 and D-036) on main. These should be fixed on main before or after merge -- the copy team cannot fix files outside their branch.
Paula's 5 suggestions are non-blocking improvements for future content passes.
Miri (critical):
- Fix 3 stale "Hael" references in decisions/content.md (D-034, D-036)
Paula (suggestions):
- Flag dual-fire 15-30s delay as tuning target in smuggler moral arc
- Clarify MIRROR NPCs can be wrong (lied to) without being dishonest
- Add implementation note for Path C deferred follow-up fork
- Note detective-NPC dialogue rotation variants for post-v0.1
- Clarify detective vs smuggler moral_weight criteria in entity attributes
Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Summary
Sprint 3 "Know" — 15 tickets building the content design foundation for v0.1. All documentation/content work, no code changes. 39 files changed, ~5,100 lines added.
Wave 0 — Wiki Maintenance
Wave 1 — Critical Blockers
Wave 2 — Design Documents
Wave 3 — Unblocked Work
Wave 4 — Double-Blocked
Tickets closed
#261, #371, #372, #374, #375, #376, #377, #380, #381, #382, #384, #396, #397, #400, #402
Test plan
grep -r '\bHael\b' docs/wiki/returns 0)hub_m_shortcodes in monologue guide🤖 Generated with Claude Code
Review: copy -> main (type: copy)
Hoshe (QA): APPROVE
Well-organized PR with 38 files, 5k+ lines. Hael->Naia Tamm rename executed cleanly across all wiki and design files. Cross-references verified (50+ links), formatting consistent, NPC profile structure uniform across all tiers. No broken links, no spelling errors, no orphaned files.
No issues found.
Paula (Narrative Depth): APPROVE
Exceptional character work. Voice discipline is strong (smuggler fragments vs. detective complete sentences). Moral arc's 4-phase progression creates genuine emotional stakes. Triangle 1 fork produces real consequences across all 3 paths. Naia as MIRROR is devastating in her honesty. PC-as-NPC neutral path elegantly solves second-playthrough recognition.
smuggler-moral-arc.md~sec4npc-patterns/the-mirror.md~sec6triangle-1-hub-power.md~sec3cpc-as-npc-spec.md~sec11entity-attributes.mdmoral_weightMiri (World Consistency): REQUEST_CHANGES
Excellent internal consistency across 18+ NPC files, triangles, and design specs. Ring structure, entity attributes, naming conventions, and dual-lens framework all verified clean. IP is original. However, stale "Hael" references remain in
decisions/content.md-- the canonical source of truth.decisions/content.md~line 55 (D-034)decisions/content.md~line 56 (D-034)decisions/content.md~line 90 (D-036)Verdict: CHANGES REQUESTED
The copy branch content itself is clean and production-ready. Three stale "Hael" references remain in
decisions/content.md(D-034 and D-036) on main. These should be fixed on main before or after merge -- the copy team cannot fix files outside their branch.Paula's 5 suggestions are non-blocking improvements for future content passes.
Pull request closed