fix(copy): address PR #84 review — pacing, prerequisites, terminology

Review fixes for triangle activation monologue lines:

- CHANGELOG: correct smuggler line count (4 → 5), add D-035 ref
- Smuggler comment: align beat labels to 5-line structure
- Smuggler 040: "looking at" → "seeing" for body-first register
- Detective 043: rewrite to remove implicit manifest knowledge
  reference — line now works without fact prerequisite gate
- Detective 044: soften from near-certainty to enumerated
  possibilities with "insufficient data" qualifier
- Triangle comments: align to D-087 terminology (T1: Kael-
  Smuggler-Ring, T2: Sera-Detective-Commission)
- Schema description: note triangle_activated also missing from
  server Situation enum alongside greeting
- D-035 amendment: register triangle-signal, tell-observation
  tags and npc_in_los prerequisite as conventions

Co-Authored-By: Claude Opus 4.6 <noreply@anthropic.com>

content/_schema/monologue-pool.schema.json

@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
           },
           "minItems": 1,
           "uniqueItems": true,
-          "description": "D-035 structural tag: situations in which this monologue line is contextually appropriate. 15 v0.1 values (triangle_activated added Sprint 24). The engine selects using trigger; situation provides additional authoring context for filtering by the caller. NOTE: 'greeting' is not yet in server/src/content/line_pool.rs Situation enum."
+          "description": "D-035 structural tag: situations in which this monologue line is contextually appropriate. 15 v0.1 values (triangle_activated added Sprint 24). The engine selects using trigger; situation provides additional authoring context for filtering by the caller. NOTE: 'greeting' and 'triangle_activated' are not yet in server/src/content/line_pool.rs Situation enum."
         },
         "trigger": {
           "type": "string",

content/campaigns/main/systems/krenn/stations/sova/districts/transit/monologue/detective/the-terminal.yaml

@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ lines:
     priority: 8
     tags: [npc, kael, investigation, evidence, analytical]
 
-  # --- Triangle Activation: Sera Venn / Torek Lintar (T2 informant-question) ---
+  # --- Triangle Activation: Sera Venn / Torek Lintar (T2: Sera-Detective-Commission, D-087) ---
   # Fires post-TriangleActivated when player has LOS to Sera or Torek. One beat per line.
   # Beat 1: pattern recognition. Beat 2: deviation logged. Beat 3: hypothesis. Beat 4: inference. Beat 5: procedural next step.
 
@@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ lines:
       npc_in_los: true
 
   - id: pc-detective_m_d_043
-    text: "If she knows about the manifest discrepancy, why has she not reported it?"
+    text: "Avoidance without cause. Either she does not know about the discrepancy, or she knows and has chosen silence."
     role: player_character
     access: [public]
     trust: surface
@@ -494,7 +494,7 @@ lines:
       npc_in_los: true
 
   - id: pc-detective_m_d_044
-    text: "She is protecting something. Or someone. The distinction matters."
+    text: "Possible explanations: fear, loyalty, complicity. Insufficient data to distinguish."
     role: player_character
     access: [public]
     trust: surface

content/campaigns/main/systems/krenn/stations/sova/districts/transit/monologue/smuggler/the-terminal.yaml

@@ -374,9 +374,9 @@ lines:
     priority: 9
     tags: [npc, kael, contaminated-trust, friend-arc]
 
-  # --- Triangle Activation: Kael Davan (T1 hub-power) ---
+  # --- Triangle Activation: Kael Davan (T1: Kael-Smuggler-Ring, D-087) ---
   # Fires post-TriangleActivated when player has LOS to Kael. One beat per line.
-  # Beat 1: physical observation. Beat 2: rationalization. Beat 3: doubt. Beat 4: doubt breaks.
+  # Beat 1: physical observation. Beat 2: rationalization. Beat 3: doubt. Beat 4: sensory confirmation. Beat 5: emotional break.
 
   - id: pc-smuggler_m_s_036
     text: "Kael's in the main corridor. He doesn't usually come through here."
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ lines:
       npc_in_los: true
 
   - id: pc-smuggler_m_s_040
-    text: "I don't know what I'm looking at. But I know Kael. And this isn't Kael."
+    text: "I don't know what I'm seeing. But I know Kael. And this isn't Kael."
     role: player_character
     access: [public]
     trust: surface