diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/awareness.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/awareness.yaml new file mode 100644 index 000000000..b78674819 --- /dev/null +++ b/content/global/knowledge/awareness.yaml @@ -0,0 +1,42 @@ +# Fact catalog: awareness +# Situational awareness — who's present, active threats, operational status +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.2 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: awareness.detective_presence + description: A Commission detective is operating on Sova Station + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler] + notes: "Smuggler learns through rumor or direct observation. Detective does not hold this fact about themselves." + + - fact_id: awareness.detective_investigating_ring + description: The detective is specifically targeting the smuggling ring, not a routine audit + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: awareness.commission_audit_scheduled + description: A Commission audit is coming — officially scheduled + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: awareness.ring_route_compromise + description: The current drop route may be compromised or under observation + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: awareness.surveillance_change + description: Surveillance patterns in the maintenance corridors have changed recently + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: awareness.ring_tension_escalation + description: Something is wrong inside the ring — someone is scared or making moves + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: awareness.inspection_sweep_active + description: Active inspection sweep in progress right now + typical_confidence: direct + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "direct confidence — set by environmental observation, not investigation" diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/behavioral.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/behavioral.yaml new file mode 100644 index 000000000..f3fc545e0 --- /dev/null +++ b/content/global/knowledge/behavioral.yaml @@ -0,0 +1,42 @@ +# Fact catalog: behavioral +# Behavioral patterns recognized through repeated observation across multiple scenes +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.3 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: behavioral.kael_evasion + description: Kael looks left when lying — personal tell recognized post-conversation + typical_confidence: direct + characters: [smuggler] + notes: "Set during a conversation where evasion is detected. direct confidence = just confirmed." + + - fact_id: behavioral.kael_behavioral_change + description: Kael's behavior has noticeably changed — quieter, distracted, different routine + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: behavioral.sera_avoidance_pattern + description: Sera consistently avoids Torek Lintar — leaves when he arrives, repositions + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "One observation = suspects; three observations = knows_of (pattern confirmed for detective)" + + - fact_id: behavioral.sera_topic_deflection + description: Sera deflects specific topics — Commission work, manifest audits, freight + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: behavioral.sera_kiosk_pattern + description: Sera habitually stops at the same Commission kiosk at the same time + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: behavioral.sera_knowledge_detail + description: Sera's offhand comments reveal detailed knowledge of manifest routing she shouldn't have + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: behavioral.voss_awareness + description: Voss is tracking people — situational awareness beyond normal supervisor behavior + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [detective] diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/contraband.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/contraband.yaml index df2c774aa..718aafdf6 100644 --- a/content/global/knowledge/contraband.yaml +++ b/content/global/knowledge/contraband.yaml @@ -1 +1,39 @@ # Fact catalog: contraband +# Smuggling ring world facts — existence, components, operations, supply chain +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.5 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: contraband.ring_exists + description: A smuggling operation is running through Sova Transit District + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler starts at knows_details (Background — they ARE in the ring). Detective starts at suspects." + + - fact_id: contraband.ring_lattice_components + description: The ring moves unlicensed lattice components — aftermarket neural mods + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler starts at knows_details (Background). Detective discovers through investigation." + + - fact_id: contraband.ring_medical_components + description: The ring also diverts medical-grade lattice replacements from Syndic supply chains + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Deep investigation only — the moral dimension of the operation" + + - fact_id: contraband.supply_chain + description: Understanding of the ring's supply chain — where components come from + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: contraband.severance_tech_presence + description: Severance counter-surveillance technology is in play on the station + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [detective] + + - fact_id: contraband.drop_tonight + description: A drop is scheduled for tonight specifically + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler] + notes: "Seed-dependent — only relevant in seeds where a drop is scheduled during play session" diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/investigation.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/investigation.yaml index 0e79cb5c4..d85c36a9b 100644 --- a/content/global/knowledge/investigation.yaml +++ b/content/global/knowledge/investigation.yaml @@ -1 +1,127 @@ # Fact catalog: investigation +# Case-specific findings — events witnessed, evidence discovered, NPC behaviors confirmed +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.1 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: investigation.kael_corridor_meeting + description: Kael was seen in corridor B-7 off-shift, apparently meeting someone + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Shared fact ID; smuggler perspective = operational security breach; detective perspective = initial observation" + + - fact_id: investigation.kael_corridor_sighting + description: Detective's initial B-7 observation — Kael spotted in maintenance corridors at unusual hour + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [detective] + notes: "Detective-only initial ID; may upgrade to kael_corridor_meeting after corroboration" + + - fact_id: investigation.kael_unknown_contact + description: The person Kael met in B-7 is unknown — not from the regular rotation + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.kael_ring_membership + description: Kael is a member of the smuggling ring + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.kael_exit_attempt + description: Kael is actively trying to leave the ring + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.manifest_discrepancy + description: Cargo manifests show irregularities — containers, weights, routing anomalies + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Detective starts with this at suspects (Background). Smuggler may encounter it during operational checks." + + - fact_id: investigation.cargo_anomaly + description: A specific cargo anomaly — wrong container, wrong weight, wrong route + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.shift_mismatch + description: Shift records don't match observed personnel — someone is covering for someone + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.voss_ring_involvement + description: Voss manages schedule changes to cover drops — involved in ring operations + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.torek_spending_pattern + description: Torek is spending beyond his dock-worker means — visible at bar + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.drin_inspection_pattern + description: Drin's inspections are conspicuously lax — clearing containers without real checking + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.drin_gambling_debt + description: Drin has a gambling debt — leverage for whoever is running him + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.oversight_gap_pattern + description: Inspection gaps are systematic, not accidental — someone designed the blind spots + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.surveillance_gaps + description: Specific surveillance camera blind spots in the maintenance corridors + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler knows from Background (operational necessity). Detective discovers through investigation." + + - fact_id: investigation.smuggling_route + description: The specific smuggling route through the station + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.ring_existence + description: A smuggling ring is definitely operating through Sova Transit (detective's confirmation) + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [detective] + notes: "Detective starts with suspects from manifest anomalies. Smuggler knows via Background (knows_details)." + + - fact_id: investigation.renn_courier_role + description: Renn operates as a courier in the ring — runs packages between drop sites + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.corridor_regular_use + description: The maintenance corridors are regularly used for smuggling, not just incidentally + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.container_delay + description: A specific container has been held in temporary storage longer than normal + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: investigation.sera_evidence_held + description: Sera has unreported evidence about manifest irregularities — sitting on it deliberately + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [detective] + notes: "suspects from avoidance pattern; knows_details only if Sera discloses or evidence found independently" + + - fact_id: investigation.naia_lattice_condition + description: Naia's neural lattice is degrading — the medical components are for her + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Requires Kael disclosure or independent medical evidence" + + - fact_id: investigation.ring_leadership + description: Who directs ring operations — late-game discovery + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: investigation.drin_inspection_pattern + description: Drin's inspection patterns protect specific containers at specific shift windows + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [detective] diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/knowledge.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/knowledge.yaml new file mode 100644 index 000000000..f41479add --- /dev/null +++ b/content/global/knowledge/knowledge.yaml @@ -0,0 +1,32 @@ +# Fact catalog: knowledge +# Operational knowledge — ring procedures, social dynamics, institutional mechanics +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.4 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: knowledge.ring_routing_knowledge + description: Full knowledge of the ring's drop routes and timing protocols + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler] + notes: "Smuggler starts at knows_details (Background). Not available to detective through normal investigation paths." + + - fact_id: knowledge.ring_bar_operations + description: The bar (The Last Shift) has a role in ring communications or social cover + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: knowledge.bar_back_room_significance + description: The bar's back room is significant — meeting space, handoff point, or storage + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [detective] + + - fact_id: knowledge.bar_ring_awareness + description: Bar regulars have varying levels of awareness of the ring — open secret at some level + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: knowledge.kael_exit_plan + description: Kael has a specific exit plan — timing, conditions, contact + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Only available through Kael's deep trust disclosure or independent investigation" diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/location.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/location.yaml index f87eec878..a720099cc 100644 --- a/content/global/knowledge/location.yaml +++ b/content/global/knowledge/location.yaml @@ -1 +1,51 @@ # Fact catalog: location +# Location-specific access, restrictions, and significance +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.6 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: location.corridor_b7_restricted + description: Corridor B-7 is a restricted access zone — requires credentials + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Both characters have this from Background (signage, institutional knowledge)" + + - fact_id: location.corridor_b7_drop_site + description: B-7 is an active drop site for the ring + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler from Background. Detective through investigation." + + - fact_id: location.maintenance_corridors_access + description: Character knows the maintenance corridor layout and can navigate it + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler at knows_details (Background — daily operational space). Detective at knows_of after investigation." + + - fact_id: location.bay4_sealed + description: Bay 4 is sealed — inspection or deliberate cover + typical_confidence: suspects + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: location.span_gate_schedule_gap + description: The span gate schedule has a window that enables unseen cargo drops + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: location.smuggling_route + description: The complete physical route the ring uses through the station + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler from Background. Detective from deep investigation." + + - fact_id: location.surveillance_gaps + description: Specific camera blind spots in the maintenance corridor network + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler from Background. Detective must discover independently." + + - fact_id: location.dead_drop_location + description: Specific dead drop location(s) used for handoffs + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler] + notes: "Smuggler operational knowledge" diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/progress.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/progress.yaml index 4e93de846..e9a19f1fb 100644 --- a/content/global/knowledge/progress.yaml +++ b/content/global/knowledge/progress.yaml @@ -1 +1,36 @@ # Fact catalog: progress +# Narrative milestone flags +# Note: progress.* facts are NOT recommended for direct authoring in prerequisite blocks. +# Use investigation fact chains and relationship states instead. +# These exist for potential storyteller/arc-tracking use. +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §3.2 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: progress.friend_arc_phase_1 + description: FRIEND arc Phase 1 warmth established (baseline positive relationship) + notes: "Set by relationship state transition to Friendly. Do not author directly — use relationship checks." + + - fact_id: progress.friend_arc_phase_2 + description: FRIEND arc Phase 2 trust built (deep rapport + initial social context) + notes: "Set by trust tier advancement. Do not author directly — use investigation + relationship checks." + + - fact_id: progress.friend_arc_contradiction + description: FRIEND contradiction discovered (KnowledgeState → Contradicted) + notes: "Set by contradiction detection system. Use relationship state person_of_interest + investigation fact instead." + + - fact_id: progress.friend_arc_confrontation + description: FRIEND confronted about contradiction + notes: "Set post-confrontation by dialogue system." + + - fact_id: progress.opening_complete + description: Opening tutorial sequence completed (first 5 minutes) + notes: "Set by storyteller after initial objective sequence." + + - fact_id: progress.first_ring_contact + description: Smuggler completed first ring operation during play session + characters: [smuggler] + + - fact_id: progress.first_evidence_filed + description: Detective filed first manifest discrepancy evidence + characters: [detective] diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/relationship.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/relationship.yaml index 00943bb27..49a19c425 100644 --- a/content/global/knowledge/relationship.yaml +++ b/content/global/knowledge/relationship.yaml @@ -1 +1,33 @@ # Fact catalog: relationship +# Inter-NPC connections — what one character knows about relationships between others +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.7 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: relationship.kael_naia_connection + description: Kael and Naia are romantically partnered — not just colleagues + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler may know from background or Kael mentioning Naia. Detective through social observation." + + - fact_id: relationship.ring_membership + description: Character has identified specific ring members + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "knows_of = partial list; knows_details = full ring membership identified" + + - fact_id: relationship.trust_network + description: Understanding of who trusts whom inside the ring — operational reliability mapping + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler] + notes: "Smuggler-specific operational knowledge" + + - fact_id: relationship.tamm_family + description: Connection between Naia Tamm and her family situation + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + + - fact_id: relationship.torek_bar_arrangement + description: Torek has a financial arrangement related to the bar or its operations + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/social.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/social.yaml new file mode 100644 index 000000000..56f5682c1 --- /dev/null +++ b/content/global/knowledge/social.yaml @@ -0,0 +1,11 @@ +# Fact catalog: social +# Social positioning facts — standing in a specific social context +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.8 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: social.bar_regular_status + description: Character is an established regular at The Last Shift — recognized, trusted in that context + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler may have this from Background. Detective builds it through multiple bar visits." diff --git a/content/global/knowledge/world.yaml b/content/global/knowledge/world.yaml index 4d3bd7164..e90a87703 100644 --- a/content/global/knowledge/world.yaml +++ b/content/global/knowledge/world.yaml @@ -1 +1,35 @@ # Fact catalog: world +# Faction and institutional knowledge — Commission, lattice regulation, broader context +# Source: docs/design/knowledge-vocabulary-v01.md §4.6 (#368) + +facts: + + - fact_id: world.lattice_regulation_active + description: Commission actively regulates neural lattice component access in this system + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Both characters have this from Background" + + - fact_id: world.unlicensed_lattice_demand + description: High demand for unlicensed lattice upgrades on working-class stations like Sova + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "The moral context of the operation — smuggler knows it as justification; detective may learn it as complication" + + - fact_id: world.commission_sova_jurisdiction + description: Commission has jurisdiction over Sova Transit District + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [detective] + notes: "Detective Background knowledge — institutional mandate" + + - fact_id: world.ring_cross_system + description: The ring operates across multiple star systems — Sova is one node + typical_confidence: knows_details + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Late-game discovery — changes scope of the operation" + + - fact_id: world.shift_schedule + description: Sova Transit District shift schedule — who works when + typical_confidence: knows_of + characters: [smuggler, detective] + notes: "Smuggler from Background (colleague). Detective through investigation." diff --git a/docs/design/opening-hook-content.md b/docs/design/opening-hook-content.md new file mode 100644 index 000000000..bddc9196f --- /dev/null +++ b/docs/design/opening-hook-content.md @@ -0,0 +1,490 @@ +# Opening Hook Content Per Character + +**Ticket:** #260 | **Priority:** High | **Sprint:** 12 +**Status:** v0.1 Draft +**Owner:** Paula +**Blocked by:** #259 (First 5 minutes experience design — done) +**Source:** docs/design/first-5-minutes-experience.md (systems + narrative design) +**Decisions referenced:** D-032, D-035, D-039 (wow moment #1), D-053, D-064 + +--- + +## Overview + +This document specifies the authored content for each character's opening hook — the first 3-4 minutes of play, before any investigation or conspiracy elements appear. Content is organized by seed variant (A-D per character) and includes authored monologue lines, NPC dialogue cues, and diegetic objective setup. + +Authoring note: this document provides design spec and reference lines. Final authored YAML files go in the appropriate monologue pools per D-032 and D-035. + +--- + +## 1. Smuggler Opening Variants + +### Common Elements (All Variants) + +All smuggler openings share: +- **Location:** The Terminal (Logistics Hub), dock floor or entrance +- **Ambient:** Station hum playing from frame 0; cargo machinery active in background +- **FRIEND:** Kael Davan is the first significant NPC — established within 90 seconds regardless of variant +- **Voice register:** Terse, sensory, first-name, operational-aware. No complete sentences unless they end in an operational note. + +### Opening Line Pool (enter_location, Terminal, no prerequisites) + +These lines fire when the smuggler enters The Terminal at session start. 3-4 lines available; engine selects one based on seed variant. + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_s_open_001 + character: smuggler + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "Morning shift. Recycled air and cargo lubricant. Home sweet home." + mood: [content, routine] + tags: [opening_hook, canonical_anchor] + +- id: transit_m_s_open_002 + character: smuggler + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "Span gate's been cycling all night. Can hear it in the walls." + mood: [routine, aware] + tags: [opening_hook] + +- id: transit_m_s_open_003 + character: smuggler + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "Floor smells like a ship's hold. Someone ran a heavy cargo last night. Not ours." + mood: [routine, observant] + tags: [opening_hook] + +- id: transit_m_s_open_004 + character: smuggler + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "Early shift crew's still clearing out. Good — gives us some runway before handoff." + mood: [operational, content] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_c_d] +``` + +### Kael Sighting Lines (observe_npc, Kael, Phase 1 relationship) + +These fire when the smuggler sees Kael on the dock floor. Critical FRIEND establishment lines. + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_s_open_010 + character: smuggler + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:kael-davan + prerequisites: + relationship: + target: npc:kael-davan + state: friendly + text: "Kael's already at the dock. Good. The day's better when he's on shift." + mood: [content, fond] + tags: [opening_hook, friend_phase_1, canonical_anchor] + +- id: transit_m_s_open_011 + character: smuggler + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:kael-davan + prerequisites: + relationship: + target: npc:kael-davan + state: friendly + text: "There he is. Same spot, every morning for two years. Some things you can count on." + mood: [fond, content] + tags: [opening_hook, friend_phase_1] +``` + +### Variant A: Quiet Morning + +**Initial condition:** No deviations. Standard operational day. The run is scheduled for the transition window. + +**Opening state:** Kael is at his station. Voss is present but not focused on the dock floor. Everything is calm. + +**Operational context line (observe_anomaly — schedule board):** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_s_open_020 + character: smuggler + trigger: observe_anomaly + location: the-terminal + text: "Transition window opens in fifty minutes. Standard run — nothing complicated." + mood: [operational, content] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_a] +``` + +**FRIEND Phase 1 dialogue cue (Kael, on approach):** +Kael greets the smuggler warmly. Asks about the weekend. Makes a dry comment about Voss's new clipboard system. Everything is normal. + +*Authored dialogue line for Kael (for content pack):* +> "There you are. Voss has a new form now — cargo intake manifest version four. Apparently version three had a column in the wrong place. The man has opinions about spreadsheets." +> `access: [peer, insider], trust: surface, situation: [greeting, shift_start]` + +--- + +### Variant B: Kael Is Late + +**Initial condition:** Kael has not arrived at his expected time. His station is empty. The smuggler starts without their anchor. + +**Opening state:** Dock floor has other workers but Kael's absence is visible. A small operational tension — where is he? — without any real alarm. + +**Absence lines (observe_npc, failed — Kael's station empty):** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_s_open_030 + character: smuggler + trigger: observe_anomaly + location: the-terminal + text: "Kael's station is empty. He's always here before me. Maybe I was early." + mood: [routine, mildly_concerned] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_b] + notes: "Phase 1 tell: Kael's routine is so established that absence is noted before alarm." + +- id: transit_m_s_open_031 + character: smuggler + trigger: time_idle + location: the-terminal + text: "Still no Kael. Probably caught something. He'd have sent a message if it were the run." + mood: [mildly_concerned, operational] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_b] + notes: "Fires if player is near Kael's empty station for >60 seconds." +``` + +**Kael arrival (late, within 5 minutes of session start):** +Kael arrives slightly disheveled, slightly out of breath. Brief explanation — nothing alarming, just late. But the explanation is slightly vague. This is the first hairline crack from the very start: Kael's lateness is the beginning of Phase 2 tells. + +*Authored dialogue line for Kael (late arrival):* +> "Yeah, yeah, I know. Had a thing. Don't give Voss a reason to look at the timestamp." +> `access: [peer, insider], trust: surface, situation: [greeting]` +> *Notes: "a thing" is characteristically vague but reads as personal, not operational.* + +--- + +### Variant C: Heat from Voss + +**Initial condition:** Voss is monitoring the dock floor more closely than usual. Something has him on edge — Commission liaison spotted yesterday, or a scheduling discrepancy from last week that hasn't been explained. + +**Opening state:** Kael is present but body language is professional-not-warm. Voss is visible and attentive. The usual operational openness is compressed. + +**Environmental read lines:** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_s_open_040 + character: smuggler + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:voss + text: "Voss is on the floor. Not his usual post. Something's up." + mood: [aware, cautious] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_c] + +- id: transit_m_s_open_041 + character: smuggler + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:voss + text: "He's watching the floor. That's the third time he's passed that section. Something put him on edge." + mood: [operational, cautious] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_c] + notes: "Fires after player has been on the dock floor for 2+ minutes." +``` + +**Kael adjustment (operational caution):** + +*Authored dialogue line for Kael (in variant C):* +> "Normal morning. Don't give him a reason to notice you." [Kael says this quietly, without looking directly at the smuggler] +> `access: [insider], trust: real, situation: [shift_start]` + +--- + +### Variant D: Container Held + +**Initial condition:** Operational container 4471 has been in temp storage longer than routing protocol specifies. Not a crisis — a logistical anomaly that the smuggler needs to address. + +**Opening state:** Everything looks normal, but the first interaction with the freight system surfaces a held container. + +**Container flag lines:** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_s_open_050 + character: smuggler + trigger: observe_anomaly + location: the-terminal + text: "4471 is still in temp. That was supposed to move yesterday afternoon." + mood: [operational, concerned] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_d] + +- id: transit_m_s_open_051 + character: smuggler + trigger: observe_anomaly + location: the-terminal + text: "Scheduling held it. Voss's call. There's a reason, I just don't know it yet." + mood: [operational, analytical] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_d] + notes: "Fires on approach to freight terminal display. Teaches the player that containers are trackable." +``` + +**Kael conversation (operational problem-solving):** + +*Authored dialogue line for Kael (variant D):* +> "I saw. Voss pulled it from the schedule. He'll explain or he won't. Just don't touch it until he does." +> `access: [insider], trust: real, situation: [shift_start, investigation]` + +--- + +## 2. Detective Opening Variants + +### Common Elements (All Variants) + +All detective openings share: +- **Starting location:** Varies by variant (see below) +- **Ambient:** Station hum playing; institutional feel — cleaner, more structured than the bar or corridors +- **Social temperature:** No warm greetings. NPCs are polite and guarded. +- **Voice register:** Complete sentences. Analytical. "Filing it." "Note it." "That's interesting." + +### Opening Line Pool (enter_location, no prerequisites) + +Lines that fire when the detective enters their starting location. Selection based on seed variant. + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_d_open_001 + character: detective + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "Sova Transit District. Third day on station. The briefing said routine compliance review." + mood: [professional, observant] + tags: [opening_hook, canonical_anchor] + +- id: transit_m_d_open_002 + character: detective + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "The briefing is always wrong about something." + mood: [analytical, wry] + tags: [opening_hook, canonical_anchor] + notes: "Companion line to open_001 — these fire in sequence on Variant A/B/C." + +- id: transit_m_d_open_003 + character: detective + trigger: enter_location + location: the-last-shift + text: "The bar at 08:30. Sera suggested it. The district has its own rhythms — find them before imposing mine." + mood: [professional, curious] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_a_bar] + +- id: transit_m_d_open_004 + character: detective + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "Manifest discrepancies clustered around the freight hub. Start there. Watch the shift change." + mood: [analytical, operational] + tags: [opening_hook] +``` + +### Sera Sighting Lines (observe_npc, Sera, Phase 1 relationship) + +Critical FRIEND establishment for the detective. + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_d_open_010 + character: detective + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:sera-venn + prerequisites: + relationship: + target: npc:sera-venn + state: friendly + text: "Good to know Sera's here. At least someone in this district speaks my language." + mood: [relieved, warm] + tags: [opening_hook, friend_phase_1, canonical_anchor] + +- id: transit_m_d_open_011 + character: detective + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:sera-venn + prerequisites: + relationship: + target: npc:sera-venn + state: friendly + text: "Sera. Same as always — looks like she grew up in a place like this. I'll get there." + mood: [warm, mildly_isolated] + tags: [opening_hook, friend_phase_1] +``` + +--- + +### Variant A: Bar First (Warm Arrival) + +**Initial condition:** Sera has been contacted ahead of time and suggested meeting at The Last Shift to brief the detective on the district. + +**Starting location:** The Last Shift + +**Opening state:** Sera is at her usual booth. The bar is opening for morning service — Lera is present but focused on setup. The bar is mostly empty. + +**Bar arrival line:** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_d_open_020 + character: detective + trigger: enter_location + location: the-last-shift + text: "The bar at 08:30. Only place in this district that doesn't smell like freight lubricant. Marginally." + mood: [wry, observant] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_a] +``` + +**Lera read (public NPC, establishing social texture):** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_d_open_021 + character: detective + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:lera-sessik + text: "Bar owner. Lera Sessik — Sera mentioned her. Watching me decide whether I'm going to be trouble. Fair assessment." + mood: [observant, professional] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_a] +``` + +**Sera orientation dialogue cue:** +Sera gives a brief district overview — who the regulars are, what the Terminal is like, what to expect from the shift supervisors. This is the detective's social tutorial through their friend's eyes. + +*Authored dialogue line for Sera (opening orientation):* +> "The Terminal crew is tight. They've seen Commission before. Voss will give you what he's required to give you and nothing else. Maret's different — she worries about compliance more than the others. That might be useful." +> `access: [peer], trust: real, situation: [social, investigation]` + +--- + +### Variant B: Terminal First (Cold Arrival) + +**Initial condition:** No pre-contact. The detective enters the Terminal directly. + +**Starting location:** The Terminal entrance + +**Opening state:** The dock floor is active. Dock workers register the Commission presence and adjust. Voss is visible and approaches. + +**Terminal read line:** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_d_open_030 + character: detective + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "Logistics hub. Standard prefab, heavy foot traffic. Let's see what the shift change tells me." + mood: [analytical, professional] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_b] +``` + +**Voss approach (first adversarial NPC):** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_d_open_031 + character: detective + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:voss + text: "There's the shift supervisor. Saw me come in. He's deciding whether to approach or wait. Approaching. Good — I was going to find him anyway." + mood: [analytical, professional] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_b] +``` + +**Voss opening exchange (institutional friction):** + +*Authored dialogue line for Voss (territorial greeting):* +> "Commission liaison. Right. I was told you'd be coming by. I've got the manifest copies from last quarter ready. Standard compliance package." +> `access: [authority], trust: surface, situation: [greeting, investigation]` + +*Detective response cue (not authored — player choice from dialogue options):* +Standard question options: "Thank you, I'll need those." / "Tell me about your shift crew." / [Observe without responding] + +--- + +### Variant C: Evidence in Hand + +**Initial condition:** The detective has reviewed additional case file data overnight and arrives with two specific manifest discrepancies already flagged — container 4471 and one other. + +**Starting location:** The Terminal, arriving at the manifest terminal directly + +**Opening state:** The detective enters with a purpose they didn't have on day one. Something from the overnight analysis sharpened the investigation. + +**Investigative focus line:** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_d_open_040 + character: detective + trigger: enter_location + location: the-terminal + text: "Container 4471. Three separate appearances in the anomaly cluster. Same container ID, different cargo entries. That's not clerical error." + mood: [analytical, focused] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_c] + +- id: transit_m_d_open_041 + character: detective + trigger: observe_anomaly + location: the-terminal + text: "The manifest terminal. Maret's territory. She processes the corrections here. I want to see what corrections look like in the unfiltered log." + mood: [analytical, investigative] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_c] +``` + +--- + +### Variant D: Institutional Escort + +**Initial condition:** A Commission compliance officer accompanies the detective for the first 10 minutes — standard procedure for new postings. The escort is Torek Lintar. + +**Starting location:** Terminal entrance, arriving with Torek + +**Opening state:** The district sees the badge + escort together. Social walls go up faster than normal. Torek is helpful but slightly evasive about district social dynamics. + +**Escort read lines:** + +```yaml +- id: transit_m_d_open_050 + character: detective + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:torek-lintar + text: "Lintar. Commission compliance, four years on Sova. He'll know the social texture better than any case file." + mood: [professional, curious] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_d] + +- id: transit_m_d_open_051 + character: detective + trigger: observe_npc + target: npc:torek-lintar + text: "He's being helpful but steering me away from something. Not sure what yet. File it." + mood: [analytical, suspicious] + tags: [opening_hook, variant_d] + notes: "Fires after 3+ minutes with Torek. The detective is already reading Torek as slightly off." +``` + +**Torek orientation dialogue cue:** + +*Authored dialogue line for Torek (escort mode):* +> "The Terminal's well-run. Voss has been here eight years — knows his people. Maret handles scheduling, she's thorough. Drin does inspections, solid record. You'll find it's a tight operation." +> `access: [authority], trust: surface, situation: [social, investigation]` +> *Notes: The complimentary framing is slightly too smooth. The detective's monologue (open_051) flags this.* + +--- + +## 3. Cross-Character Notes for Content Authors + +### What both characters encounter in the first 3-4 minutes + +| Element | Smuggler | Detective | +|---------|---------|-----------| +| Station ambient | Active from frame 0 | Active from frame 0 | +| Entity color landscape | Green (Kael), teal (other known NPCs) | Grey/teal (mostly Unknown/Known) | +| First NPC interaction | Kael (warm, first-name) | Voss or Sera (institutional or pre-established) | +| First insert use | Schedule board (operational) | Case file (investigative) | +| First monologue chime | Within 15 seconds | Within 15 seconds | +| Emotional tone | Comfort in familiarity | Alertness in unfamiliarity | + +### What the opening must NOT do + +- Use the name "Kael" before the player has LOS to Kael (smuggler) +- Use the surname "Davan" when the smuggler addresses Kael (always first-name) +- Use the first name "Sera" before the detective has established visual contact +- Reference operational facts the smuggler knows ("the ring") in any way that reads as exposition +- Reference investigation facts the detective knows (manifest discrepancies) in opening lines before arriving at the manifest terminal +- Have any NPC behave unexpectedly in the first 90 seconds — baseline must be established before deviation + +--- + +*Ticket #260 — Opening hook content per character. v0.1 scope. Unblocked by #259.*